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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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In the book of Genesis

Misogyny’s the premises 

God and Adam never spoke to Eve

But the snake had something up his sleeve

Dinner and conversation for Adam’s lonely rib

Adam was clueless and God was glib

The snake listened to Eve beneath the fruit tree

Not an Apple, maybe a fig or pear - history is blind see?

Eve happily shared her forbidden fruit with her boo

They suddenly realized that they’re naked - who knew?

God punished both for its snafu its kind of insane

Adam forever forced to work the earth while Eve suffers perpetual childbirth pain

God made man, woman, and the snake

Its forbidden fruit law sealed our final fate

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