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life 1 min read 658 views Apr 2, 2019

Oblivion

"Oblivion" Its painful in this place, while I embrace life's torture, I wonder why hope dwells far from no mans land, why do I feel abandoned or had I abandoned? All the same something feels left out and it's certainly me.It's certainly a disgrace for God's grace shawers not on dead place, or perhaps only where there is life there is hope, then certainly am in a wrong place, but how shall I find my way to paradise when the path to even leads through clouded hell. How shall i be found when my presence seems more like a needle in an isle, even the dead are sometimes remembered talk more of a walking dead. By Iscomart

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LP45

Nice work Iscomart.

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Iscomart

Thanks ladypiet45 an glad you loved it

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mlowe5

Iscomart, this is a great insightful write. Oblivion is often a juxtaposed state, and you, in many ways highlight this. I continue to be impressed with your young pregnant poetic mind. May the Most High continue to shower you with poetic genius. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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Iscomart

Wow! Am so glad you understood the message, thank you very much for your complements, I really feel glad to have a mind such as your read my works

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