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Tali
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lightness in the dark
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Strip me down to my barest form

Before all the wrong and unfiltered layers of unbearable pain took hold of me

Here, bare and naked,

That’s how you can truly trust me

Mentally, spiritually, emotionally, Strip me

Let me see what you can do with your mind and how you can transform me

And

I’ll sing your song for you 

Tell tales of your survival for all of those who’ll listen 

Let my inner self fall deeper in love with you

I need more than a physical stimulation

I thirst for wisdom

Tell me that you hold the keys to what I can explore?

I want to go into the depths of a man who knows who he is

I crave spirituality

The answer is not in between my legs

It is in my mind

Kiss me there

Flatter me with conversation

Love me so I’ll never have to question

Marry me

Let’s have children together

And we can teach them all the wisdom that we can give

Let’s create and nurture generations

Speak their names into the universe like deities

What can you offer me?

What can I offer you?

Master my pursuit

Respect me

Remember that I am a woman, your woman

I am also fragile, soft, loving and caring

And with time, I believe that we will be alright.

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TEEDUB815 says:

Good Writing Skills. TEEDUB815
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mlowe5 says:

Tali_sosweet...wow! Beautiful write my Daughter. Such profolund imergy of the allegorical reminder in a previous poem of yours where it was so clear that had it not been for our glorious "foremothers", we would not have our forefathers! Much Respects my Daughter. Thanks for this share. Powerful! Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Forgive me. I mispelled "imagery". Typing too fast. Perfection on earth has yet to be mastered by mere mortals. Again, thanks for sharing another great write. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Tali says:

Thank you so much for reading. Mlowe it's so encouraging that you read and remember my poems, I have such great respect for you and I really admire your work, thank you.

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Charles2 says:

Deeply spiritually inspired ...calling, into being... prayers, are answered... more often than not... keep on believing

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mrmelody7 says:

I love dazzle wehn I played basketball watch basketball love dazzle in my favorite trype of music and I love that unique dazzle in poetry which I rarely read but you Miss Lady I have always told you got it that dazzle that pizzaz
 

Tali says:

Mr Melody, thank you as always I am honored, and I appreciate your comments so much!

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Elvan says:

Well written, this is heartfelt and beaming with wisdom and knowledge. It seems to flow naturally from your heart and mind. I like the depth of feeling you bring into your art.
 

Tali says:

Elvan I apologize I saw this comment very late. Thank you, and your observation is correct. The heart takes over and flows on to paper. Thank you for reading.

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Elvan says:

My pleasure, keep on producing great work.

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