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Eye see you and eye see me

Suffering and running

Tedious and serious

Refusing to give up, to let go,

And eye cheer for you fierce warrior,

But what are we fighting for?

 

If you think life is about fun,

How dumb do you think eye am?

If it was so what’s the point?

Because you do, you are a pond

In someone else’s shooting game.

Ultimately, you have yourself to blame

 

But eye don’t blame you, how would eye?

Eye know the game, eye understand the program,

Would you? Get out of the frame

And see with my eye, see the whole

Dodge the crap, snap your own paradigm

 

You say you are woke

Yet you hide behind the smoke

Of a fictional reality.

Yet you refuse to go the extra mile,

To self-love, to peace, to reconcile

 Yourself with eye, to reveal your divinity.

 

Life is a school and you are an egg ready to chicken

Would you hatch? Would you watch

The drift and stop the broken brain?

Would you catch the soul train

To divine destination?

Would you set off your mission?

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mlowe5 says:

Nice write bang'o lu. Both a pond and a pawn has its egg. It is the chick inside pecking, that will determine who comes out and sets off to mission. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing, mlowe5
 

bang'o lu says:

Thank you, I appreciate the comment

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