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Passing Storms

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 I cried when you did.

Your pain touched me

like a tornado thrashes a village.

 

I cried when you did.

Your anger erupted inside of me 

like a volcano blows up a countryside.

 

I cried when you did.

Your sorrow struck me

like a blizzard beats down a town.

 

I cried when you did.

Your hopelessness devasted me

like a hurricane flattens a city.

 

I cried when you did.

And when the winds

of emotion subsided,

you and I bathed

in a calm blue sea of hope.

 

You were not longer a gale

waiting to happen.

Our hail fueled

a cyclone of change.

 

 

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Reprinted from book: Angels in the Forest

 

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

Power. Well penned wordsMAKEus. Great word play awakening beautiful shared imagery of emotions. Thanks for sharing, Peace and Love, mlowe5

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