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Daughter Of Thunder

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I silence the lambs, and scatter the goats...

And even the wolves begin to flee, when the lioness

Is provoked.

When coming through with the sword of truth,

The world misconceives my energy.

Because the spirit that counsels me

Is that set apart deity.

Don't be offended by the gift that has been given me.

And for my sake... I will make no apologies.

My father is a man of war!

And I'm his daughter of thunder.

I cry out loud and spare not,

Causing them blind ones to wonder.

They don't understand this fire,

So, they pray for the exhaust of my flames.

My enemies are also pharisees ,

That forsaken his sacred name.

And in vain... they do claim to worship him.

Teaching their doctrines, the traditions of men.

And in my opinion...

Their assemblies, are also just as guilty as sin.

THE BUILDINGS ARE BURNING!

But the deaf, dumb and blind are slumbered,

And they can't feel the heat.

The dead rebukes my warnings,

So now... I mush shake

Their ashes from beneath my feet.

But I will continue

To wear my heart upon my sleeves.

Until the day of redemption has come

And the spirit that cries out loud,

Will no longer grieve...

-Jen'uwin Mor

 

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

What a "Black Lightening" beginning! But what else should one expect of the Daughter of Thunder?! A beuutiful pounding rhythmic flow echoing loud and clear. Another powerful share. Thanks. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
 

jwins says:

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoy. I humbly appreciate you.
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mlowe5 says:

Peace and Love, mlowe5. Keep the Thundering echoes going.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Heavy duty lady we had a saying in high school when someone say somethin unexpected Scared Of You Lightning will kill you but sometimes when the loud bowling ball continuous rolling Thunder gets to pounding and knocking more afraid of the Thunder then lightning you are very deep Mz Lady
 

jwins says:

Thank you
 

JustGreylon says:

Wow!! This is awesome. If we had a rating system thos would be a 5 star in my book. Bravo woman poet!

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jwins says:

@JustGreylon Thank you sir!
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Brilliant work!

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