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Iscomart
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My life has always been a puzzle too hard to figure out and my ways entangled in confusion.

 My legs have lost the zeal to stand as I watch myself come to a conclusion

I am drowning in the pool of oblivion, I wish I get saved for darkness chokes me out of sight,

and while I drift away in this void unnoticed I willing resist to shout

Now the devil finally gets to smile as I slowly shrivel out of form yet not his doing but mine

Do not blame me for my mind isn't as strong and my will doesn't last long.

By iscomart

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is deep!

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love_supreme says:

Da*n

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mlowe5 says:

Iscomart! so great to hear from you! What a beautifully deep insightful write. I love the progressive rhythmic flow of this write. You are developing a beautiful pregnant poetic mind. It is an honour to be aquainted such a young poet as yourself. Write on, young Brother; write on! Peace and Love, M. Lowe
 

Iscomart says:

Thank you all! For your comments mean a lot to me
 

jwins says:

This write right here... hit too close to home. Great way of expressing such anguish, while still rising above its depth... Keep rising and rising. beyond the skies the limit...

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