“The mind is friendly stranger”

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life 1 min read 496 views Sep 6, 2020

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My life has always been a puzzle too hard to figure out and my ways entangled in confusion.

 My legs have lost the zeal to stand as I watch myself come to a conclusion

I am drowning in the pool of oblivion, I wish I get saved for darkness chokes me out of sight,

and while I drift away in this void unnoticed I willing resist to shout

Now the devil finally gets to smile as I slowly shrivel out of form yet not his doing but mine

Do not blame me for my mind isn't as strong and my will doesn't last long.

By iscomart

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The Immortal Wize

This is deep!

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mlowe5

Iscomart! so great to hear from you! What a beautifully deep insightful write. I love the progressive rhythmic flow of this write. You are developing a beautiful pregnant poetic mind. It is an honour to be aquainted such a young poet as yourself. Write on, young Brother; write on! Peace and Love, M. Lowe

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Iscomart

Thank you all! For your comments mean a lot to me

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jwins

This write right here... hit too close to home. Great way of expressing such anguish, while still rising above its depth... Keep rising and rising. beyond the skies the limit...

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