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What if this is merely just another chapter to the story before the sequel comes out

Another pit stop before reaching the final destination where the GPS adjusts and reroutes

What if this was written as part of the journey for us to truly learn ourselves and value one another

Another test in life to strengthen the friendship that already existed and reinforce the connection as lifetime lovers

What if it’s not and this is really how the story ends

And two people who were once deemed as soulmates were only really meant to be friends

What if we just forgot about each other and the love just disappeared like smoke in the air

And the love we always thought existed was never really there

But what if this was God’s plan..

Not meant for us to understand

Nor comprehend

Set up for us to heal, rebirth and mend

What if..

Everything we went through, every trial and tribulation..

We were supposed to go through in order to reach our true and final destination

And we never needed any warning or explanation…

What if this…

Isn’t it

What if it she wasn’t sent to replace me..

and you were not replaced by he

because the only thing that was supposed to be replaced was the old versions of who we used to be

what if we were supposed to let go of our old thoughts that kept us captive so that we can finally be free

Free of the burden of the past

Free of the pain that seemed to stick around and last

Free of the doubt that tainted the love we had

Free of the darkness that turned all the good into bad

Free of the temptation that lurked in the shadows

Free to follow the path that we were not ready to take upon and now we’re able to see all of the once invisible arrows

What if..

What appeared to be a curse was really a gift

And what awaits us in the future is greater than what we have ever imagined it could be

A revised love story where the real main characters are only a new you and a new me

What if…

 

 

 

 

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poeticsoul says:

Wow!! that touched me so deep. I love this.. Just beautiful
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mlowe5 says:

A beautiful pen detailing the journey from "being in love" to the destination of "giving and being loved." Love the contemplative flow of this powerful write. Thanks for the share, ari84. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

LP45 says:

What if....ari84, this is a very enlightening and thought provoking write. You hit this one outta the park. Keep writing, I'll be back. Thank you for sharing.
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Charles2 says:

a blues music ballad to be sure... like the way you present/represent the angle ...of the dangle/what if?

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