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mental illness or mental awareness

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life

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Some are left to wonder when the misery will leave

They fill up with tears and dont know the reason why

They have good days, and bad days, or weeks with grapling despair

Days that they are high, because the feelings are running deep to show afffection, and love

Days that are low, and feelings of isolation, not wanting to be around no one

oh, what a whirlwind, up and down, round and round

its hectic, like a boiling pot of water, just dont touch the pot,

you might get burned, burned in your feelings, this is no fun

life is such a rollercoaster, or at least it can be,

we often dont know what to do with these feelings,

 my suggestion get you some medicine if there are no other options, and a therapist

figting demons as some would say needs character

only you can determine what to do with these feelings

focus on positivity, and optimism and never forget someone cares

I care!

You are not what you perceive, you are much more!

 

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mlowe5 says:

Profound, 40 Gifted_and_Classy! Indeed, when we've survived the "whirlwinds", "burns", and "rollercoasters" of youth, we then must begin to climb the "winding staircase" of life---which is not 'crystal'! It is here, thus that we must realize and seek contemplative divine wisdom and guidance. with respect to "...[oppressive]... mental illness or...[healing]...mental awareness." Thanks for sharing this uplifting, awareness poem. Peace and Love.
 

40 Gifted_and_Classy says:

thanks again, mlowe5 for reading. i admire you work.
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Inspiring!

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