Reverie
Reverie
In the middle of the day
My dreams play.
In past lives these same stars
Lit my way.
Yesterday’s morning sun warmed
My cold face.
Today, I sit watching the rain.
Tomorrow my feet will play at the end of an
old river bank.
™BrownChild
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Reverie
In the middle of the day
My dreams play.
In past lives these same stars
Lit my way.
Yesterday’s morning sun warmed
My cold face.
Today, I sit watching the rain.
Tomorrow my feet will play at the end of an
old river bank.
™BrownChild
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Nicely done!
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You are on fire. Excellent write.
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@Charles2 thank you
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@Love_supreme Thank you for saying that it means a lot.
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Creativity in your writings
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mrmelody7 Thank you
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Very nice
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