Ebb & Flow
Our mood vast cross- currents
Enfold, Stir, Swell, Bend, Dip, Whirling Flux
Rippling tides of immature Emotions.
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Ebb & Flow (Haiku)
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mlowe5 says: Nice imaging. On the second read, I got the referenced flow: 5-7-5 words as opposed to 5-7-5 syllables! Peace and Love.poems by this commentor
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Brownchildt says: thank you. I tried to follow the rules, but this is what I came up with. lol |
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