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Big Bang!

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   Thirteen Billion, Seven Hundred Thousand, roughly.

The existence of a Universe.

   Determined by astronomers.

Omo Valley, some Two Hundred Thousand years ago, roughly.

   Determined by Paleontologists.

Symbolizing the beginning of mankind.

   Leaving Thirteen Billion, Five Hundred thousand years of nothingness, roughly.

   Galaxy upon galaxy, void of life.

As if something so magnificent would be so limited.

   For something to know what life is.

It had to be given life by something that already exists.

   The creator, the Omnipotent.

For which can not be calculated by arithmatic.

   A being of unsolved mystery.

That will only come to past, through Revelation.

   To a place prepared for salvation.

Paved in gold.

   A road, only known by a saved soul.

No amount of pretending, or falsehood.

   No one can deceive the originator of good.

The architect of the artifact, known as mankind.

   The one's who covet the flesh.

Though life's reward can only be received in the spirit.

   Amen!

 

 

   

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2b2b2 says:

Deep, deep share......Tight sentiment....ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Yes indeed! In the depth of darkness of all of this, He said, "...Let there be light...[and eyes to see]...". Thanks for this well-penned enlightening imaging and deep allegorical message. ONE, my Brother. Peace and Love.

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