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Shattered

CATEGORY

just different

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NOTE: I'm not too sure about this one!! What do you guys think seriously?? Do I need to Revise and work some more on this one??? How does it sound to you guys???

 

Like an Explosion of Dynomite

Like a Bomb that Ignites

Like a Grenade that goes Boom

Gives out vibrations of fuse fumes

Or a Cannon that Fires Off

Or the Hands of the Clock that

Goes Tick and Tock

Or of the Firweworks that Pop

Or the speaking of

these words it won't Stop

Or the Substance of Matter

The talkative people of Chit-Chatter

Because of the sound

of the Glass that Shatters

Do you think it Would it Really matter

DID YOU HEAR THE SOUND OF GLASS

JUST SHATTERED???

 

 

By: B.R.

Date: 9/25/2022

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mlowe5 says:

Wow! nothing like "shattering" oppressive silence and picking up the "pieces" to mold the "sounding" word! "Shattering oppression always matters. Great share. Thanks. ONE. Peace and Love.
 

Belindathapoet says:

Thank you. I was unsure about this one so, thanks for your feedback!! @mlowe5

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