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Pat
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How do you look at the minutes that I have given you ?

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Do you think that they fulfill your needs 

Do you count on them to make you happy?

Or do you selfishly want them for entertainment. 

Where are your minutes ?

Do you say anything out loud? or do you just keep them to yourself ?

Would you let me talk forever and let me layout a road map to my heart 

With no need to ever take that journey. 

Where are your  minutes ?

 

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minayaJ says:

Deep. Kudos to you! Keep sharing your time

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love_supreme says:

Very nice! Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

Visioned in minutes peace, love, and unity of being and becoming one in the onederment of onederfulness. Thanks for the shared minutes, Pat. ONE. Peace and Love.
 

love_supreme says:

I like this poem.

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