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life 2 min read 413 views Jan 7, 2023

Unsightly Monstrosity

can I kill this elephant in the room the room was no place for the elephant in the room it wasn't enough space for the elephant the in the room I tried to ignore the elephant in the room it was hard to look away from the elephant in the room I can't believe there's a elephant in the room it's hard to conceive a elephant in the room I can't breathe with a elephant in the room I can't leave with a elephant in the room do you see the elephant in the room am l the only one in the room who sees a elephant in the room why is there a elephant in the room why am I the only one questioning the elephant in the room I'm not comfortable with a elephant in the room no one wants to talk about the elephant in the room we need to address the elephant in the room the elephant in the room stands out like a elephant and in a room the elephant in the room is a big problem am l the only who has a big a problem with the elephant in the room I can't move the elephant in the room all by myself I need help from someone else but unfortunately I'm the only one who acknowledges the elephant in the damn room

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Colette

That is so true, people ignore, play deaf and dumb and for some reason, they just don't want to acknowledge the "Elephant" in the room. This took thought and effort and was perfectly put together. Well said, well written and very well understood.

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love_supreme

Yo, this is nice.

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