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I'm feeling him

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Once upon a time... There was this Sun that shined He was so defiant and well defined Like a Deity of his own design His Chakras were all aligned And Sun rose above a life of crime He harbored an air of authenticity That is rare and simply hard to find Sun remains one of the real ones, That didnt drop not one dime Instead he took it like a man and served the court ordered allotted time Sun rises and Sun shines to any occcasion He is manifestation of Love A complex,conscious, creative creation Sun is the brightest one in the sky Here to shed his light on his Nation... Sun's Dedication

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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POWERFUL!

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Thorough29 says:

Love!!

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