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tiffanyr
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getting back into my poetry grind

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"My Little Girl"

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Still a little girl dressed in pink twirling in the daisy field in my own imagination is what I am in my present 

All grown up ,but still an lost child looking for adult validation in all the long hollow tunnels getting all delusional searching like an compass for my father figure my life saver my own god in an man who got sin and pride

My tears stream like an river behind my fake smile that can't be seen outloud 

making my own ocean for miles

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COMMENTS

 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Mz tiffanyr long time I call this a smile write cause as I read I still can see your user picture you used when I first read your work the pic of a young child very nice write
 

Tiffanyr says:

Thanks for the positive comment love_supreme.
 

Tiffanyr says:

@mrmelody7 yes its been a long time because I been unmotivated by poetry and my artwork. I'm so honored for this comment and how you remembered my first user profile.

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