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"Promises"

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Promises we make we break

Promises some of us cut lose years ago

Promises we keep away from God on the downlow

Promises is hard for us to let slip out of our mouth

Promises is not what we talk about

 we slip that under the couch

Promises is like a resolution our goal one day then a failed mission the next

Promises are important to God,but we shoot it down

Promises are broken by the best and the worst

Promises are like commandments we obey them, but don't write them on our hearts

Promises are like lies the more we don't keep the first promise we got to make another one

What do we make and break

" Promises"

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Promise you that this was well done lots of rich edible golden knowledge in this
 

2b2b2 says:

Word Up....Sooo very true....thanks for sharing!
 

JustOneStoryTeller says:

Nice write well done!

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Tiffanyr says:

@mrmelody7 thanks and I will spit more edible knowledge in the future.

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Tiffanyr says:

@mrmelody7 thanks and I will spit more edible knowledge in the future.
 

Tiffanyr says:

@2b2b2 thanks for reading.

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Tiffanyr says:

@justonestoryteller thanks

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