Just_Me_Kelee | Poetry Vibe
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lightness in the dark
Ramblings of a slight maniac, heart of a hopeless romantic. Visions of a possible prophet, sometimes i feel that ive lost it

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But it Feels Like ...



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Cutting loss,

Counting costs,

Seeing your wounds are sovering even if you will never see mine.

For everything I dislike about you there are ten more I love.

Creating boundaries feels like watching you give up on yourself. 

Its like I can see your brokeness infused in your mentallity...

Seeping out in every other word ...

I think its ***ed up (to you) how I shrank myself to fit in your space ... Dishonest maybe ?

It cant be fair that I cardon off little pieces of me ... the parts I dont trust you with.

Even though I didnt give you a chance to prove yourself trustworthy.

Sometimes your ego brushes up against mine leaving scrapes and scratches.

Yet still I am drawn to you ?

Yet still your chest is my favorite place to sleep ??

Yet still you posess power to disarm me with such ease ???

But it feels like a self betrayal ...

The silence of your rejection was deafening.

Its almost painful to hold back nurturing and loving energies when I can feel you needing ... 

But it feels like ... you cant see the fullness of me; of my value. 

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

it's ironic, Just_Me_Kelee, how love can often cause some to fear its fulfillment.

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