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life 2 min read 570 views May 23, 2024

Superfluidity

if I told you I feel like
I'm on top of the world
you would'nt believe me
at all if I told you I 
fell you would believe 
in the fall you worship
all my vulnerabilities 
and all my flaws you 
give praises to my 
disability you don't 
believe in my ability
I got possibilities
I got responsibilities
feelings of warm 
intensity driving me
to create a legacy
you want to see me
down when you see 
me speed up you 
quick to slow me down 
to minimum you can't
limit the limitless I got
too much viscosity
high mileage low
density in a leage of
my own never fear the
walk alone been down
that road too many 
times before never
once met the devil
at the cross road
came across a few 
loss souls looking 
for directions to 
heaven told em hell
if I know look into 
these eyes tell me 
if you you see the 
observer observing me
always feel like 
somebodies watching
me from afar to see 
if I'm up to par
won't let down my
my guard I come too
far I fell too hard
you look like you
seen a ghost I bet
you felt sick inside 
when I got up can't 
help the cancer in
side of you stay
tuned for more  
I plan to up the 
score to stage four
feel the metaphor its 
real I know it's harsh 
I come in peace not 
for this strife to bury 
me I affirm attest
contend profess to 
make waves regardless

 

 

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mlowe5

Great flow! The unaware still have a way to go towards awareness. We must---with the eyes of God guiding us---continue in the labor of love he has assigned us as we continue to flow waves of frothing awareness to sand-dry shores. You have set the score, Immortal Wize; and we are blessed to follow. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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Hypersuperfluidful

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