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Breadcrumbs2021
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Inseparable

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Can you view
 this picture
Sent

as a message
carved in stone
Asking

does it convey the
meaning of this song
While

blending notes with
the chorus of the wind
Telling me I

can never go back to
where time begins
To

the sound of angels
and harp strings
Grounded
connections
to heavenly wings
Alive with the
possibility of so many
things
Listen to
the sound of rushing
water moving thru
a stream
Transforming melodies
now carved in stone
Forming
blended notes
While
being carried by the wind
Picture these words
And
read it again.


P.R. 5/26/2024

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mrmelody7 says:

Those last three lines I did just that Enjoyed this magical write and ride Title one of my all time favorite LPs by my forever favorite singer Natalie Cole Very lyrical write

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Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Thank you, mrmelody7, Ah yes, a reminder of Natalie, another angel from heaven, thanks.

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful! Went back twice. Love the flowing poetic canvas, Breadcrumbs2021. Thanks for the share. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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Breadcrumbs2021 says:

Thank You mlowe5, you're a constant inspiration, thanks.

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mlowe5 says:

ONE. You are likewise inspiring. PEACE AND LOVE.

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