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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I heard the sound glass make when a window break disturbing the peace I heard a dog barking ferociously refusing to cease I heard a scuffle between two or more I heard a sound like talking but the voices were muffled I think someone was in trouble possibly someone needed some help the whole situation I heard could be mere speculation I have no clue nor do I have any evidence to form a solid theory nor support the imaginative conclusion I came to other than a funny feeling about something that sounded seriously suspicious grabbing my attention long enough to get up turn on the light and record the night in a close at hand black and white marble composition notebook I heard a door open I heard squeaky running shoes in the hallway on the floor I heard a blunt object fall in the fourier I heard a car door slam in the driveway I heard screeching tires on a vehicle driving away moving way too fast to stop in time then I heard a sound further away that sounded like something really heavy smashing into something really solid then silence and all was silent in the asylum

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

A profound noisy canvasing write from the beginning to the coming shared silent echoes! ONE. PEACE AND LOVE.

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