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Because We Once Were

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It’s strange the rugged roads
We traveled—
Bearing the treacherous loads,
With a love unraveled.
But social status would have its way:
Splintering society gradually splitting
Us astray—
Now, we eternally ponder with what to say,
When meeting on another bereavement day.

Who would have thought we would ever part;
Interwoven like the water and salt of the sea?
But the winds of change were veiled at our start;
Now I've moored away from you and you from me.

It’s strange how the waters of life ebb and flow;
And how undulating love just seems to come and go.
Now all is forgiven and we’ve survived the sorrowing grief;
May Jah continue to grant us peace and everlasting relief?

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RonnieL says:

Beautiful and reflective piece!

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mlowe5 says:

RonnieL, thanks for the read and time taken to send feedback. Its always good to hear from you in your creative writing and comments. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, love_supreme. Thanks. Peace and Love.

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