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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Final Breaking Point (10132025)

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not everyone has a gun but everyone has a trigger I say this because any day any time any place any where you might come across or cross the line of someone pushed beyond their limit fed up pissed off down to their last straw let's say their fresh out ain't got no mo straws but got a gun and quick to draw and you did or said something to tick 'em off we all have something that we know can easily set us off but we can't expect everyone else to know what that something is this is what makes the world a dangerous place to live in every day you have to figure out different ways to stay alive the objective is to keep moving forward and survive with every stride and not be victimize the pendulum swings both ways side to side our next move could be suicide read the room read the signs these are the times to be extra cautious and very careful not to put our self in a avoidable position for someone else to decide whether we live or die and we must take extra precautionary measures to keep our cool under pressure we all going through an emotional tunnel some stopped somewhere in the middle refusing to go any further waiting to stop you in your tracks cut you off at the path and head you off at the pass you need to know to look out for that you may already know this but you hearing it again I hope it sinks in

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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The Softness of A Shadows says:

“Words of the wise, my poet, please enjoy your Monday as I wish you a prosperous Tuesday, softly whispering on the horizon.”

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