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Systems Go (Repost)

the hardest thing to get out of is a system one system leads to another system system are made for problems systems do not solve them Systems form institutions though systems are geared to help there are no solutions the real problem lies deep in the system systematically we are dramatically drawn by the government cheese like bee's to honey trees forced down on to our knees to beg for our needs to be met worth more than the wages we get though we may swell the plan in the grand scheme of things is for us to rebel against the system causing us to fail though we past with high test scores we find that our grades are poor we are sore and hell no  we can't take no more they are in full riot gear waiting for us to come through that door just to be thrown to the floor though we may follow its hard to trust those who are hollow they give us food stamps  but who's minding the store the system is a maze with corridors forcing us to feed on each other  like carnivores once we get over the hedge don't look down we are standing on the ledge though we may fall off it's too shallow to drown in      

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