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life 2 min read 363 views Nov 29, 2025

A Deep Resounding Message (11292025)

distance yourself from those who invest their interest in your misery find someone who wants the best for you if you can't find that special individual then being alone is what's best for you if you have to practically force and manipulate your way into a group you need to stop trying to fit into a space where you're obviously not wanted if you keep checking for a message and there is no message for you that means no one is checking for you don't be sad don't be blue fix your mouth wear a smile this message is for you "people will count you out but a time will come when they will need you to count them in" like Joseph in the pit left for dead by his own brothers because he had a dream don't tell nobody about the dream you had better yet don't tell nobody "I have a dream" life will have you crying streams asking God "Lord what does this all mean" why do I keep having these dreams how come everytime I wake up I see things that make me wanna scream those I love act like they hate me when I'm around friends I feel the walls closing in it's lonely but you're not by yourself I see visions I write verses in cursive to reverse curses I listen intuitively to the whispering still voice inside warning me reminding me telling me "pay attention to your surroundings" it doesn't take much to detect when "someone don't like you" but you refuse to believe that "they don't like you" don't wait around to find out "they don't like you" it might be too late to escape the truth when it grasp you heard this before you're hearing it once more the battle you're in is a spiritual war it is not for the weak it is not for the meek hold on be strong though it may tarry it won't be too long before you score

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