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life 1 min read 210 views Dec 6, 2025

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though you have been pricked by the cactus you do not believe in the desert until you see the sand to be pricked by the cactus is not enough the desert's truth only reveals itself with the sight of sand a cactus prick may sting but it takes the sight of the sand to make one believe in the desert only by seeing the sand not merely feeling the cactus's prick does one truly believe in the desert's existence you been pricked by the cactus still you don't believe the desert until you see the sand "Interesting"

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mrmelody7

The read the desert the sand the prick(thought u Were talkin bout Stephen Miller TRump racist right hand man) Interesting

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