The Immortal Wize

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Say! Can You See

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can we see what's going on

can we find a way

to bring peace and love

here today

can we find a way to conquer hate

we don't need to escalate conflict

can we stop senseless violence

can we stop mothers from crying

can we find a way

to bring some understanding

here today

you tell me what's going on

I'll tell you what's going on

can we see where we went wrong

can we see the errors of our ways

today

can we deliver our children

from an early grave

can we see what's being done

to our daughters and sons

can we see our contributions to the pain

can we see war is not the answer to peace

leaders and their violent policies

breeds more suffering

can we resolve societal problems

instead of resorting to aggregation

we don't need no more oppression

can we find the answer to the questions

"where is God"

can we not be afraid to ask

"where is our God "

we got to find a way to wake the

WHAKAPAPA

our strength is in know thyself

can we unplug for a day week month

can we log out

without logging back into

the propaganda

can we stop feeding the machine

starving us depriving us of

deeper connections

you tell me what's going on

I'll tell you what's going on

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OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY The Immortal Wize

Say! Can You See

can we see what's going on

can we find a way

to bring peace and love

here today

can we find a way to conquer hate

we don't need to escalate conflict

can we stop senseless violence

can we stop mothers from crying

can we find a way

to bring some understanding

here today

you tell me what's going on

I'll tell you what's going on

can we see where we went wrong

can we see the errors of our ways

today

can we deliver our children

from an early grave

can we see what's being done

to our daughters and sons

can we see our contributions to the pain

can we see war is not the answer to peace

leaders and their violent policies

breeds more suffering

can we resolve societal problems

instead of resorting to aggregation

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Clinging {12132025}

Normal

The

Kind

Change

That

Can

Drive

One

Insanity

Compost {12132025}

I turned over a new leaf

now its a old leaf

on a pile of dry leaves

All In Order [12132025]

this timeline is like

walking a tightrope

you gotta perform feats

you gotta practice

balance to stay on top

if you fall off into the

deep end you gotta

do what you can to

stay afloat practice your

stokes hope for a boat

and pray that you don't

get blown out the water

Deaths [12132025]

I died so many times

I stopped counting

all the funerals

Do We (12122025)

we don't do what we got the right mind to do but we got the right mind to do it don't we don't say what we really want to say but we really want to say it don't we don't ask the right questions do we but we really want the right answers don't we don't act like we mean it do we but we damn well mean it we act like we care don't we but we really don't care do we really wish we could don't we but we can't do what we wish we could do we don't do much do we

Shift (12122025)

your timeline is your current moment what's on your timeline? what you see is what you're experiencing what's on your timeline? your scroll shows your reality what's on your timeline? the content on your feed is a mirror of your present life and thoughts what's on your timeline? your digital path shows where you are in life whatever is on your timeline is what time you're on what's on your timeline?

Firewater (12092025)

alcohol is not a drug alcohol is a flammable liquid it burns like lit gasoline we pour alcohol into our gastro intestines like a dose of medicine to get a feeling that only last until the next refill we don't know that a fire burns in our soul and we have no idea that we are fire

That Chair (12092025)

I kept that chair I put that chair over there to see loved ones sitting there loved ones who once set in that chair

Direct Modulation (12062025)

though you have been pricked by the cactus you do not believe in the desert until you see the sand to be pricked by the cactus is not enough the desert's truth only reveals itself with the sight of sand a cactus prick may sting but it takes the sight of the sand to make one believe in the desert only by seeing the sand not merely feeling the cactus's prick does one truly believe in the desert's existence you been pricked by the cactus still you don't believe the desert until you see the sand "Interesting"

Say! Can You See

Say! Can You See

Clinging {12132025}

Compost {12132025}

All In Order [12132025]

Deaths [12132025]

Do We (12122025)

Shift (12122025)

Firewater (12092025)

That Chair (12092025)

Direct Modulation (12062025)

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