to a great poetic griot
who's presence was felt
who's pressence is missed
a teacher who taught
who spoke words he meant
who's kind words meant
more than the ink it took
to write poems and haikus
that shall forever live
The Immortal Wize
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Mr. Lowe
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mrmelody7 says: Great acknowledgement and tribute to one of the great ones tp visit the Vibe 2b2bsure as I called him another great one both always commented on rvrryone work |
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The Immortal Wize says: Yeah, 2b2b2 is one of my Artists Lounge brothers we go a long way back. |
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