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life 3 min read 586 views Jul 14, 2013

You are me

Its weird how they tell you they understand, feel your pain and know what you going through,

 

They say all these sympathetic words that they think will build you and give you comfort

 

Yet they unconsciously crush you and beat you to the gr0und and destroy your last hope of survival,

 

HOPE ITS SELF,

 

 

 

I mean why is it so hard to understand that even if I gave you my shoes so you could walk a mile in my life

 

You still will not understand my view of things, that no matter what you and I will never come out the same?

 

Think about it for a moment,

 

Yes they are my shoes and they do fit your legs,

 

Yes it is that very road that I walked on that you walking right now but it is NOT MY FEET THAT ARE ON YOUR FOOT RIGHT NOW!

 

They are different,

 

 

 

My pain and yours may have been dealt by the same object at the same force but we wont feel the same way,

 

We wont react in the same way,

 

geez dont you get it?

 

You can feel it, see it, go through it! But it just aint the same,

 

 

 

Just so you know,

 

THERE ARE ONLY THREE PEOPLE THAT WILL EVER FULLY COMPREHAND WHAT I AM FEELING,

 

ITS THAT GUY I SEE WHEN LOOKING AT A MIRROW AND GOD ALMIGHTY!

 

AND GOD ALMIGHTY MY CREATOR,

 

 

 

See created me and knew me beforehand, ordained he path of my life and knew that I will overcome,

 

Jesus descended to make me His descendant and break me free of all imprisonment,

 

walked the path of my life before I was born to understand me,

 

And I stare in my mirror I see the scars of my journey that are GPS co-ordinates to where I have been,

 

Roads that I have taken, and Victories that I have achieved,

 

 

 

See you will Never know me like my Father that dwells in Heaven,

 

Love me like a brother thatt died for me knowing that one day I will reject Him before I love Him,

 

Understand me like the me that has died to make way for the warrior that stands before your eyes,

 

See sacrifices had to be made all the way from my Father down to me so that I may be complete,

 

See challenges had to be overcome, and you will face these challenges, you will overcome,

 

Just dont make the mistake of thinking you are me.

 

 

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The Immortal Wize

Very deep concept, I could feel every word of this.

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SmurpheeeMajor

I hope you feel the message

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love_supreme

Very nice

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