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odonko-ba
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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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battlescars in rearview mirror

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 bus leaves in five minutes

might as well be five hours

one minute feels an eternity

as the rain begins to fall

memories cascade

over vibriant realities

becoming bitter

as time rushes in

and love rushes out

conversations become entanglements

divisions of independent thought

turned quickly

into perfidious satire

the thump thump thump

of your fist

against my heart head and face

i coexist but cease to exist

hiding behind an overzealous 

pair of designer sunglasses

as if donna karan

could cover up the shame of your designing

thump thump thump

fist wailing

glass shattering

relationship broken

the pieces scattered over time

thump thump

but i love you

i thought you loved me

thump

my mouth

becomes a metallic ritual

of beating drums

played out in blood

upon my emotions

the bus leaves in five minutes

echoes through the station.

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

This goes hard!

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2b2b2 says:

WOW...Vivid Capture....Surreal and Heart Wrenching.....thanks for sharing....ONE

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