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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Talk it Over

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first love

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a sorry apology is what you gave to me

I don't believe you think you did a thing to me

you said I broke your heart in two

that wasn't me that was you

mine is   in pieces like broken leases

we were supposed to be doing this

now we are doing that

my wounds are open your hand is filled with salt

that's assault with a deadly weapon

this hurts too bad I can’t let you see me sad

I treat you like I never ever loved you

but that's not true deep inside I hide feeling for you

I don't remember the words that came between us

what the fight was about why we had to scream and shout

I forgive you for whatever it was all about

can we work it out can we sit down and talk it out

of me talk it   out of you tell me now where do we go from here

you lead and I'll follow behind my heart my pillows wet with tears

you're taking it too far I'm trying to breathe

please don't...

please don't leave

I'm trying to breathe...

let me breathe

 

 

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<3 says:

I really like this piece.
 

spoken in my tone says:

good job!
 

ferdinandmagellan says:

Man you are always on point!

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