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first love 2 min read 632 views Sep 28, 2013

HE IS NOT A KING

He takes his time and preys on young women like you
Women who have past life issues that were never solved
Women with a family that never prayed together for strength
With fathers who have other families and made siblings she has never met
And black mothers who worked hard day and night to feed their children
So there was no time for you
Young woman, you have always known you were beautiful
So when he first saw your shape and makeup that enhanced the physical attraction
You knew he would approach…

She takes her time to get to know him
The young man she now cares about after only 3 weeks’ worth of text messages everyday.. Those good morning messages he sent when he would awake
The young man who built his life around living and never growing
With a family he would kill for
A woman he loves and respects… but is the only woman he respects, his mother And a father who he no longer has a relationship with.
He has a mind like other men but seems innocent
 

She didn’t know this about you
But now she loves you

All because you made nature ten times more beautiful after she met you


He made her different. Made her feel like a woman
He changed her mind in a way she cant explain
 

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