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just different 1 min read 592 views Oct 31, 2013

Awaken Silence

I’m in pain not the normal kind  

Trying to sift through my mind  

Leaving fragments behind

  Missing lines and parts  

Dark stages and empty seats  

Partial divide between sea and sky  

Why do potatoes have eyes?  

Is the moon a communion wafer in the sky?

  Dammit to it all

  Pain appears out of nowhere  

Sense is not to be found  

Coldest days all year long  

Sun shines in a storm  

What beats inside me divides me  

From the fog that hides me  

So much blood

  Hung out to dry  

Cut to the bone

  Passion burns through my  steel  

Melts and runs down hill    

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LP45

Nice work. Great imagery too. Keep it going.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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