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catmartan
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lightness in the dark

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 Come unto me,I beckon you

let me inspect you through and through

I will search deep down inside

the things you kept hidden and 

tried to hide 

 

 

I discovered hurt and pain 

restlessness and mental strain

 

I discovered foolish pride

peer pressure and suicide

 

I discovered envy

malice and jealousy

 

I discovered distrust

deceit and sexual lust

 

I discovered hatred

dishonesty and animosity

 

The list goes on and on

to the deepest deep and the longest long

come unto me I beckon you,I will remove

these things ,and make you all brand new.

 

 

 

 

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COMMENTS

 

SensationThePoet says:

deep my sista, i enjoyed every word.
 

catmartan says:

Thank you so much!!!

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The Immortal Wize says:

Stop picking the shrimp out of my gumbo put down the shovel, you're gettin too deep Nicely done!!

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catmartan says:

HA! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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TamaraD says:

BOOM!!!! Love it love it love it
 

LP45 says:

Very nice write catmartan. I really liked this one. I'll be back to read more.

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