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SoFloetic
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Sleeping with a Broken Heart

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romance

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I fell asleep with a broken heart

And it wasn't easy to say the least

My pillow covered in tears

Thinking about these past 5 years

That I spent with you

Giving you my heart

And the way you just tore it apart

And as I begin to dream

I could picture you and I

Laughing and Loving

Living our life free

In my dream you proposed to me

You got down on one knee

You took my hand

You looked at me and said together we will stand

I will love you for eternity

Will you please marry me

And I said yes as the tears rolled down my face

I have been waiting for this day for so long

You are my king, Take your throne

Then slowly the images began to fade away

I tried to hold on

I wanted them to stay

But it was to late it was only a dream

I cried at how real it seemed

But it wasn't my reality

I had to face the fact that you would never marry me

And this really tore me apart

I hate sleeping with a broken heart

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The Immortal Wize says:

Awesome!

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skb74# says:

Very Good!

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Repstylez says:

SoFloetic u r the ill

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2b2b2 says:

SUPERB CAPTURE.....(Standing Ovation).....ONE
 

royale Jones says:

Beautifully vivid. Thank you for sharing

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mirage says:

even tho im a man I know this feeling feel thanks for your share

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