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just different 1 min read 614 views Feb 14, 2014

Twelve Steps Towards Redemption

 I forfeit all my worldly ways

I seek the help I need

I start anew, the ground afresh,

I plant a different seed.

I cannot hide here anymore,

Here there is no light,

It seems in all my nights of dark,

I lost what meager sight,

I had before, oh woe is me,

Oh pity here, the fool, 

Who did indeed once play the game,

Committed to the cool. 

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The Immortal Wize

Well played

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DallasCowgirl

This is very smooth and well written. Keep up the good craftsmanship!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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