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Precipitation in the Valley

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Once upon a time, to long ago for certain

There was a valley that remained unvisited

At least that is how it seemed within its chasm

Tropic in vegetation, uninhabited for ages

The heat was steadily increasing, a quiet storm brewing

As the heat began to rise to heights way above surface

Warm fronts of currents wafting across the horizons

Causing temperatures to rise even way downwind from the valley

Rolling thunder could be heard as a monolith quickly approaches

As if the valley’s heat was a beacon for hard rocks to seek entry

Extending through mountains and sands , even trees at great distances

The monolith’s velocity increases as the valley walls did quake amiably

Welcoming in this monolithic oddity within its open air enclosure

Its trajectory was in sync as it shimmy in alignment in boundaries

Caused by the valley’s state of climate, crashing perfectly between

Resting directly over her opening, creating showers of precipitation

Momentarily there was a long post crash silence and peace in the valley

Slowly the monolith and the valley began to rock, roll and shake

As if caught in some geological magnetic reaction caused by impacting

Increasing its rhythm in exponential increments, as fire, rain, snow begins

Lasting for seasons upon seasons, the huge rock and valley continue vibrating

Until the rock buried deep within the valley’s center, billowing lava material

Raining seed s of species of flora and fauna in wild varieties……

As our love is formed and grew strong from a rock within her valley!

The End….or Is It?

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mrmelody7 says:

Vivid imagery, easily visualize your words in motion
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks for checking me....ONE
 

poncho65 says:

Enjoyed the journey from write to end

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poncho65 says:

Enjoyed the journey from write to end

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love_supreme says:

Good write.

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shadchan says:

Wow. Epic. You written this so well...like a movie unfolding.

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks....Namaste

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