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A Rising Sun

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In distant gaze

She searches stifling air through a heavy haze

It waves like a humid sea of disdain

As salty rain escapes her flushed face

She is statuesque in digesting pain

It’s where she’ll often reside


Emerging determined on the other side

A superwoman and pillar of strength

Her fortitude is her embrace

Neglected at length

When her fruitful juices should be every man’s drink

A thirst quenching intelligent taste

Of powerful mind

And everything I know to be grace

Despite turbulent skies



She finds reason to rise

When I study her prideful eyes

I can easily see

There is no such thing as a setting sun

Only patience, and in prayer she’ll be

Always the optimistic prophetess

She is the rising sun

In her

God’s work is never done

Wherever she chooses to stand

This is where she’ll thrive

She will scratch and claw

But she will always survive

And as the sun

She’ll continue to rise

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royale jones says:

deep analogy! nicely written...

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darylg44 says:

Thanks Royal. Thanks for reading man

mrmelody7 says:

very lyrical style in your writes easy flow with movement enjoyed

darylg44 says:

Thanks appreciate your kind words

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2b2b2 says:

Beautiful Homage....thanks for sharing.....well crafted....ONE

darylg44 says:

Thanks again...humbled

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underhiswings7 says:

Very nice piece!

Te'ArraPoetry says:

Nice poem.

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