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Rhone
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THE ENVISION OF MY MIND. WRITING IS AN INSIGHT TOWARDS MY SOUL. I JUST WANT SHARE IT WITH THE WORLD

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laugh now cry later, im a dictator, of the unless craft i speak, can you seem to believe in the language the decieved, than look at me, i thought i was free, that i can fly above gravity, but actually i was underneathe thegrind that seem to blinded by the effect,that once was charged than take me ino mars, flashy cars meaning money, than you giving the poor nothing

giving not from the heart and wanting something, a thought of a long lost man, thats trapped in quicksand, which is the vioce of demand, that the logic to lack to understand, i can comprehend pretty well, so tell the others to set sail, how come i fail, when the heart is pure and we wasnt sure to let the evils take us underneathe the bull, i want to curse

but the proverbs gotten worst the end meets the beginning to start all over with the sinning, and you thought this was new, same thing changes around the world, diamonds and pearls are rare, the attitudes come just from a stare and how fair, is when the process of the meaning of an inner being that he was dreaming of success, life put him through so many tests

how on earth can you say he was blessed when you dont see his unhappiness, the present anf the future is past tense, the opposite of the fence, you forgot that my ancestor gotten lynched from some bull, well, now, lets keep this positive, as long as we lived, but how can you forgive, the remedy, then when you see me, chosen not to believe me

against all odds, bad credit without using a cards, if we was smart we will go to school, but that the outside looking in, when they never thought about walk in the path that explains to show your action of wrath, now do the math is it subtracting more than adding, our mental is lacking, and the fact brings the little of the abscene, we are on the same team

but other dont see it that way, me, myself, and i, i got to survive a holocaust of a man, we lack to understand, that the government are the celebrities and everybody else is just fans, gain to the rapture that the thought of you and the thought of me have gotten capture, pause, who else want to get involved, unsolved mystery, the deleted thoughts of our history, company wants more misery, then misery will have you missing me

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love_supreme says:

Very nice. Great write.

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tretre says:

I like the poem..I admit I personally got lost at times and had to go back and re-read it :) but other than that I liked it. Keep that pen movin Rhone!

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