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The Rose

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Here's the end, here it goes

the last petal to the rose.

It's black and withered, ready to decay

no amount of fight left, to my dismay.

I thought that it could last longer,

stand the test of time, be a little stronger.

Now it's fallen to the ground and silence is left all around.

I'm left with the darkest place of my own thoughts, the moonless midnight of my mind.

It's the place I fear, but can no longer run and hide.

The rose is gone, only thorns are left to see

the beautiful soul that once was can no longer be.

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mrmelody7 says:

Such vivid imagery and thoughts-the moonless midnight of my mind-a poem within a poem very nice
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2b2b2 says:

Brilliant Capture and Play.....ONE
 

LP45 says:

This is really good! Amazing imagery and flow. Well done.

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