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life 1 min read 655 views May 23, 2014

CrackMan

Cracked hands

Crack rock in hands

Puts the pipe to the crack of his mouth

Hes a crack man

He lights it up

And Inhales deep

About to go on a binge

3 days, no sleep

Brain releases

That dopamine

Euphoria

Mind at ease

Slowly losing the touch

with life's reality

No appetite

Audible hallucinations

Balance is vertigo

Twitching and shaking

Been 10 minutes

High is diminishing

Time for a another hit

Time to replenish it

Cracked hands

Crack rock in hands

Puts the pipe to the crack of his mouth

Hes a crack man.

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sonofsun5211

LOVELOVELOVE this poem.... it is actually quite similar to my style.... Loved it...

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thekae

Thank you. Thank you I appreciate the feedback -sonofsun5211●●●

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The Immortal Wize

I love wordplay and raw truth, very clever.

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amin901

Good work sweetie

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