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life 2 min read 615 views Jun 6, 2014

Poetic Injustice

i know i've made mistakes

 

don't we all do it

 

just to prove that we understand

 

we must have already been through it

 

but don't pursue it

 

don't go there

 

the places i've been

 

were no fair

 

so where

 

am i going with this

 

no where

 

because we all feel the same pain

 

and the same strain that it brings

 

passing blame with name games

 

with no reason to explain

 

i mean i've made mistakes

 

don't we all do it

 

i just don't understand

 

why you would put yourself through it

 

when you're blatantly wrong

 

don't go there

 

it's poetic injustice

 

because it's no fair

 

so where

 

will you be going with this

 

no where

 

because we could be in the same car

 

traveling in the same lanes

 

same speed same terrain

 

same track same train

 

somehow we still make mistakes

 

it's ok we all do it

 

i can prove it

 

you can go and ask others

 

who have been through it

 

most of them are used to it

 

they don't even care

 

the way i see it it's no fair

 

they've never been any where

 

still stuck on the same place

 

still doing the same thing

 

they fail try again

 

and don't even make a change

 

i mean we all make mistakes

 

but it should be the last time you do it

 

who needs proof it's understood

 

if you've already been through it

 

don't pursue it

 

don't go there

 

the places i've seen

 

were no fair

 

so where

 

am i going with this

 

no where....

 

Poetic Injustice.

 

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2b2b2

Deftly Crafted.....Great Mind !

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gedsmumma

snap-snap-snap ty for sharing

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sonofsun5211

than!x-))

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sonofsun5211

nd you're welcome...

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