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romance 1 min read 649 views Jun 6, 2014

why you?...

when you're ok it's all right

but you've got it all wrong

you see it's not alright

to make my nights long

just because you're all good

doesn't make me okay

there can still be bad for me

even on your best days

and not to be selfish

or even self-centered

but you know if i'm doing bad

as soon as i enter

so do good by me

and i would stand by you

instead you make me hate love...

why you?

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scash102

Very interesting point of view. Great poem!

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2b2b2

Tight Flip....Well Played...thanks for sharing!

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