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romance 1 min read 646 views Jun 9, 2014

Dumbfound

Looking for love

 

but instead dumb found

 

me now im stuck on stupid

 

looking so dumbfound

 

i didn't know

 

you didn't know

 

you can't know

 

what you won't

 

therefore

 

how can you know what you don't

 

please ease these breezes

 

for they leave trees leavless 

uprooting deep roots

like cyclones of love

that cycle with hate

the cycle it's fate

 ache is  what it takes

to break us 

too much on the plate

 it saves us

 our appetites ate us

and our own games played us

in an outrage 

we outrage us

how outrageous

cold contagious 

im down to pages

the only places

i can hide

the sun can shine 

and dumb can't find me

 

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tretre

I like this poem. I enjoyed reading it. My favorite part was "Like cyclones of love that cycles with hate, the cycles it's fate, ache is what it takes to break us up. Loved that part. Beautiful work. Always keep that pen movin SonOfSun!

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