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just different 1 min read 676 views Jun 10, 2014

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I’m highly affected by children who cry

I look to the mothers to ask why

Have you given up do you love them enough

Do you give them hugs when they fall do you pick them up

You’re no old lady you do not live in a shoe

You have many children and more are due

To come into this crazy world a boy or a girl

Teach them well save their souls from hell

Life is not a fairytale still there are so many stories to tell

Like the answer to, where were you when the child fell

 

 

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Igotastory

I love this poem / its the same thing I want to ask my mom and dad

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FerdinandMagellan

Your poems are ALWAYS great

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tretre

So sharing this....I hope you don't mind. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!

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