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life 1 min read 670 views Jun 18, 2014

The Holes

the holes we live in

 

in which we fell

 

the holes in stories

 

that lie in lies we tell

 

the holes that are left

 

once love has failed

 

the holes we dig

 

the holes we dig

 

oh what a grave hole

 

in the dead of the night

 

must we dig our way through

 

to see the life of the light

 

oh so low

 

lower the holes

 

these raking spades

 

and shoveling hoes

 

they are the roles

 

that are used but exposed

 

the holes we dig

 

the holes we dig

 

they are where we lie

 

but not where we sleep

 

they are where we grow

 

but not where we eat

 

where we lose

 

but not where we meet

 

our demise

 

but where we greet

 

our future tales

 

deep in the wells

 

the new me emerges

 

i take a deep inhale

and go under.....

 

into the holes i live in

in which i fell

the holes in the stories

in the lies i tell

the holes that are left

once love has failed

the holes we dig

are for ourselves

 

 

 

 

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2b2b2

Tight Work....thanks for sharing!

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The Immortal Wize

I could say a lot about this poem but no words could convey how It made me feel, very thought provoking.

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Wordman21

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