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just different 1 min read 594 views Jun 20, 2014

Cobwebs

what you said to me caused

the walls of my chest to hurt

though my journey was planned since

my birth I know that I was not a

planned birth I arrive during a

throw down

between a bunch of fools and

some circus clowns

life prepared me for a showdown

cautiously and vicariously I move

through wilderness jungles

and underground terminals

the world is too noisy

to detect an escaping sound

i am  distinctively bound

by a certain attraction of action

nothing shapes me like words

waiting to be spoken as a token

marking the occasion with a keepsake

crispy rose pedals and empty champagne bottles

broken glass from broken mirrors

propelling dearly departed, broken hearted

reflections and backwards directions

 

 

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tretre

OHHHHHHH!!!! I gotta share this one....I know people who could relate to this poem. I feel you speak for those who can't speak for themselves. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!!!!!

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