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BangEpiphany
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Different eyes see...

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Look at me,

Look at me and tell me what you see,

Don't mention anything beautiful to me,

No!,

Forget that I'm human,

Really look at me and say what you feel,

Deeply study me and say it,

Feel my inner vibe,

-

I see a lost soul,

Trying to swim to its rightful river,

I see an animal that's well trained,

But is still an uncontrollable beast,

I see a square trying to change into a circle,

Forcing her beautiful corners to disappear,

Making her no longer unique,

I see her sunsetting as she watches the moon shine over her,

She is the spark to her own fire,

I see her as a boring book cover,

But if you open her up she becomes an unforgettable alluring story,

You're a inconspicuous Goddess,

A soul drifting into a world of hate and love,

Yet still manages to keep your distant,

And stay different,

You my friend are not a worthless creature,

You are a unique bright star,

That I gaze above and wish to every night,

To me this is what you are,

My Love.

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tretre says:

When I read this poem I said "Wow" You captured what I feel at times. Beautiful poetic piece. Keep that pen movin BangEpiphany!
 

scash102 says:

This is very inspirational and great example of self love. Incredible poem.
 

BangEpiphany says:

Thanks guys I appreciate it.

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