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just different 1 min read 649 views Jun 26, 2014

Echoing feelings

My tears are falling, falling for you

You’re making me cry, cry for you

 

This letter I’m writing, I’m writing to you

It’s you who makes me feel the way, the way I do

 

I can’t stop my heart from aching, aching for you

I’m so tired of waiting, waiting for you

 

I’m sick of hating’ hating you not knowing

 Why I feel, feel the way, the way I do

 

You left me calling, calling you

My mind was thinking, thinking of you

 

So hard I was trying, trying to convince myself

That I still loved you, loved you and you

Loved me, Loved me too

 

Trying hard to believe, believe that you had

To do, had to do what you had to do, do

 

Inside I was begging, begging you

But still, still I couldn’t get through

 

I was far, far beyond feeling, feeling blue

What color, what color is broken, broken into

 

 

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